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Wilted Flower
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All love is lost
But please, At what cost?
NO longer is the sun in it's place
leaving behind a garden of a shadowed place
The clouds become the mask in which the sun begins to hide
Where it's truth and self is pushed a side
Just like a wilting flower struggling to survive
The wilting flower is are love
With each falling pedal
one part of our heart
Is turned to meadel
A long side that wilted flower
is the beautiful one with all the power
Taking away all it's left pleasure
The memories that could last forever
Replacing it with pain
NO longer can it remain sane
IN a field full of flowers, would you notice it gone?
Would you stop and look? Before moving along?
Would you be subdued, by all the lovley flower
just starting to bloom?
Even if you did see that wilted flower, would you care?
would you pause and take a second to stop in stare?
To think to wonder, if it was fair? Would you stop and take care of this flower?
Would you even think to dare?
Or....
Would you take notice to the beautful flower
Standing up high. It's colorful pedals pionted towards the sky.
Would you notice it was the same as the others?
Kind of like a family full of sisters and brothers.
Ask yourself this question......
Either the beautful flower you dare not touch?
Or the wilted flower that means so much?
Copyright ©
alyssakoren_03
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2004-11-26 19:31:12]
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Re: Wilted Flower
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by Catalina on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:40:21 PM AEST
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Wow, this was an awsome write. The text was so interesting.
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Re: Wilted Flower
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:45:13 PM AEST
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Awesome write. Very creative.
NO longer is the sun in it's place
leaving behind a garden of a shadowed place
I would have changed one word.
Leaving behind a garden of a shadowed space.
Very good work. Keep writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Wilted Flower
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by pixie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:16:15 AM AEST
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wow an amazing write,
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