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Departure at 1:43pm
Contributed by
lizabeth283
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Shattered, crushed- all alone
With no one there for me
Broken, hurt- forever more
And no one seems to see
Whimper, weep- all alone
I tried to hold it in
Sniffle, sob- forever more
Again I didn't win
Repair, mend- all alone
I wish we never met
Restore, fix- forever more
Just trying to forget
Listless, limp- all alone
A bleeding heart that cries
Sluggish, slow- forever more
A heart now slowly dies
Copyright ©
lizabeth283
... [
2004-11-26 15:48:00]
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Re: Departure at 1:43pm
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:00:43 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang tuff, my friend.
I do know the feelings and after the separation it wasn't easy but I'm happy now, alone.
luv, huggs, strength, hope,
emy |
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Re: Departure at 1:43pm
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by socialburnin on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:56:55 PM AEST
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| excellent write...if its any consolation i no how u feel...whoever this was isnt worth it, youll find someone better |
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Re: Departure at 1:43pm
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 01:37:55 AM AEST
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| wonderful write! it's a sad one, but it's something everyone must endure from time to time. good job. |
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