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Scream Through the Jaded Dream
Contributed by
black13
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:06:27 PM in AEST
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Coldest heart won't seem to warm
even though it seems to only burn
but all it does is cause more harm
broken during its own ascending turn.
Never reached to feel life
when surviving just felt like strife
caught beneath the dull bladed knife
a day that ended well kept belief.
No future to look forward to.
No past to break free of.
And chains break like walls
as souls shatter inside eternities halls
echoing the revival of have to's.
Waiting, sometimes, for that kiss
so long
the one that freely binds.
But of course
such fairytales
do not exist.
Copyright ©
black13
... [
2004-11-26 15:06:27]
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Re: Scream Through the Jaded Dream
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:12:17 PM AEST
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| so...uh... depressing... good writing though. |
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Re: Scream Through the Jaded Dream
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:15:53 PM AEST
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I hear ya but I still believe in fairy tails.
ood work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Scream Through the Jaded Dream
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:24:53 PM AEST
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I thought that this was very well written. I know that I'm still waiting, and I can only wish that I didn't have a past that makes me want to break free. Keep writing
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