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No One Cares
Contributed by
sunshiny
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:19:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel my soul falling to pieces every day...
Every minute...
Every second...
The pieces never heal
And nothing and no one tries to help...
No one hears my screams
I'm trapped!
And no one cares
The sweat trickles down my forehead
As I think of all the suffering
And hurtful moments I have been through
They return to my memory...
Over and over
Does anyone care?
I think I will just go away...
Forever...
While no one cares
Copyright ©
sunshiny
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2004-11-26 14:19:08]
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Re: No One Cares
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by Arius-Inues on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:23:58 PM AEST
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Wow, I write alot of stuff like this, very nicely written and I like your name sunshiny, its kinda ironic. But all this said I think that your poetry is very well writen. Keep it up! Read some more of your poetry later.
*huggs*
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Re: No One Cares
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:25:29 PM AEST
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I know how you feel.
It sometimes seems like death is the only
answer but its not. It may feel like no one cares but there is always someone. Your never truely alone in the world. If this is how you truly feeling just remember that no matter how bad things are it can only get
better from there.
Great poem!
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Re: No One Cares
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:08:35 PM AEST
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hey, I care. I've had these feelings myself but I take medss that make it so much easier to cope over the past five years..
U gotta take care of yourself 'cause once grown we're on our own.
Life gets dark from time to time unfortunatly but we do care.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength,
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