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Contributed by
Jen54
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:58:50 AM in AEST
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You just don't get it do you?
I've tried to explain it
But you just don't understand
You've tried so hard to help me
But I don't want your help anymore
You once believed in me
And I know now you don't anymore
I gave it all I could
I guess I'm just not strong enough
So I have given up
I have lost all hope in myself
And I know that you have too.
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2004-11-26 11:58:50]
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Re: You
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:03:13 PM AEST
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short but very sad *hugs for you* I hope that one day you regain your hope in yourself,
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Re: You
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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been there and i hate it! don't loose all hope...let there be some...you will find someone or something that will eventually bring u somewhat back up again...good luck
please comment on my work too
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Re: You
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by Angelluv2write on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:19:32 PM AEST
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How sad, Never loose hope. Always remember you were put here for a reason. And someone does love you and believes in you.
Peace and Love,
Angel |
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Re: You
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:25:27 PM AEST
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Hmmm...hope seems to be such a fleeting thing in this world today. I agree with you on how painful it is when someone loses hope in you. Don't let your life depend on them. You're guessing you're just not strong enough, but somewhere deep down you know that you are. Push onward.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:54:49 PM AEST
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I've felt like this before...
Good write. |
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