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Hope
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:29:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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All I have left is hope,
It helps me feel able to cope,
If I didn’t have that I’d have nothing at all,
I know I would by tomorrow suffer a fall.
I carry my hope close,
I believe it’s this that’s helped me the most,
Without hope there would be no tomorrow,
With no hope all that I’d have left is sorrow.
Hope is something you can’t see or touch,
But it is a thing that can help you so much,
As it has me it has helped a great deal,
My hope is something nobody can steal.
At night my hope stays right by my side,
Helps me take things in my stride,
I have so much to be thankful for,
Hope for me has opened some heavy doors.
I hope that one day my happiness won’t be tainted,
I hope that one day a pretty picture will be painted,
I hope that love will always be given to my heart,
I hope that hope & I never part.
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pixie
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2004-11-26 11:29:23]
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Re: Hope
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:33:20 AM AEST
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| only one word can explain this poem.........B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!!!! |
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Re: Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:09:19 PM AEST
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Your excellence is defined by you ability to be so plainly poetic and not overly ambiguous. I love your work. So crystal clear, and yet so picture perfect. Well written. "WITHOUT HOPE ALL I'D HAVE LEFT IS SORROW". How very true for many of us. Mountains of truth and mountains of wonder. Excellent job!!!
- Daniel |
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Re: Hope
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:31:08 PM AEST
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True. I loved the line
My hope is something nobody can steal.
because it is truly hope if it doesn't depend on someone/anything else. So many people today have their hope depend on other things...and in the end all they find is disappointment and discouragement. So, again, I did like this poem, and tis on a topic well worth writings.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Hope
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:26:31 PM AEST
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Aww Pixie..this is so wonderful... Hope and memories are the two things I say that can never be taken away from me....
Great write
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Hope
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by nascarfive on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:25:46 PM AEST
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| Hearts Of Partial Eternity.. as long as there is hope..there abides eternity.. keep forever in your heart.. |
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Re: Hope
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:24:34 PM AEST
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awww sweetie this is sucha cute poem!!! I love it so muchies*hugs it* lol sry, n e ways great write, keep up the amazing work, ur one of the best poets heer!
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Hope
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:50:12 PM AEST
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A very powerfull write here.
we'd all be lost without hope.
Great maessage.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
a masterpeice. |
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