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A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
Contributed by
lemmen
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:28:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A child's depression.
Secrets unknown.
Unable to tell the horror of
one's soul.
Tears fade with the passage
of time.
Life of pain is the only truth
that is known.
Screams within a child's soul.
Demon's within the dreams of
child's youth should not be.
Life is to be free.
Not to be set in pain or
lies or deceit.
Tears within must not show.
Fears cannot let them know.
Cannot show them tears.
A smile within the eye's of pain
must show.
Never letting anyone truly know.
The horror within ones soul.
A child of youth depression grows.
Tears bleed no one is here to care
FOR ME.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2004-11-26 11:28:42]
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Re: A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:30:19 AM AEST
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wow that was deep and powerful, you really know how to use your gift of writing Dennis,
takecare,
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Re: A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:33:15 AM AEST
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hun that's so sad...you did a great job...so much truth...no one knows whats in our soul...we're dying inside...truly dying a slow miserable death
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:52:06 AM AEST
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| Good write,It captures feelings and emotions but also tells of the realities a childs depression can entail. |
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Re: A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:09:06 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Dennis....deeply touching
Jenni |
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Re: A CHILD'S DEPRESSION
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by depressedsoul on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:10:07 AM AEST
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| nice i really like this its so depressing though! keep it up :) |
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