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Alone
Contributed by
Jen54
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:47:49 AM in AEST
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It begins where it ends
In nothingness
A nightmare born from deepest fears, coming to me ungarded
Wispering images unlocked from time and distance
A soul unbound, touched by others, but never held
On a course charted by some unseen hand
The journey ahead promising no more the my past reflected back upon me
Untill at last I reach the end
Alone as ever
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2004-11-26 09:47:49]
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Re: Alone
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:48:37 AM AEST
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awww short and sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: Alone
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:28:48 AM AEST
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so much truth to this poem...reminds me of how i feel...great job bro
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Alone
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:59:24 AM AEST
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| short and too the point, I can relate to this poem very well, with your choice of words you really conveyed the feeling of loneliness...a really enjoyed this write, keep on posting |
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Re: Alone
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by emphaticplacebo on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:28:20 PM AEST
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Wow! That was a great write. I really got into this poem, and related to it on a personal level. Short, sweet and very much to the point. You have a awesome talent at hand, keep up the great work!
Dan |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:57:48 PM AEST
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I like this one.
"Untill at last I reach the end
Alone as ever"
I've often felt like this. |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:31:31 PM AEST
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| I like it too. Short but expresses aloneness very well. Blessings. |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:29:03 AM AEST
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| What Dan says. I can't say it any better :) |
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