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My RazorBlade
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:15:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In a box, lies my bestfriend, and we were that until the end...that is true....
My friend seen my mascara tears.
Watched me on the nights I cried myself to sleep.
Was there when I went too far at times.
There when I got the stitches.
There when I started to take pills.
Watched me lie there like nothing.
Watched me snot them...
Watched what they did to me...
My bestfriend has even tasted my blood.
My bestfriend was even there the night I died, did nothing to stop me from attempting suicide.
Because my friend thought that it was just another desperate act, wanting help..
My bestfrined was even there after I died....
Because my bestfriend is my razorblade, who helped me commit my suicide...
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:26:09 AM AEST
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| Very disturbing but a great piece of work. I wish you could find some peace in yourself. Try listening to the Grateful Dead. I find it extremely therapeutic. Much peace to you. Take care. |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it, well done!! |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by girish on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:19:52 AM AEST
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dear friend, leave the razor blade take me as your friend and read my poems that will solve all your problems. a pen is mightier than a sword hence hold the pen as your friend rather than the razor blade.
girish |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:57:23 AM AEST
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wow! one of my best friends commited suicide
and reading that brought back so many
memories. I hope you find peace before something bad happens.
-Jen |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:20:59 AM AEST
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wow that as so powerful I really felt your hurt and pain coming through your write, very sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:38:55 AM AEST
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| you know i care about you and how i want you to stop you left last night with not one word i was worried and could not sleep last night Dani the blade is not your only friend you will always have a friend in me |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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| very well written and powerful write, you were able to show your emtoions so well with the words you choose, I can relate to this poem because I too self-inflict and soemtime think about what it woudl be like to commit suicide...well very well written and very emtoional, keep on posting |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:15:29 PM AEST
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Please don't do it again. i did the same thing and then i relized how much it would hurt my family and friends. please i don't think i know you and you don't no me but just think there is a lot of people that care. And if you think who then just think that i care about you. if you pray you will also get a answer that people care about you.
luv,
jenna jones |
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Re: My RazorBlade
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by Mandy2007 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:00:39 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, it describes me perfectly. I have many "friends" (knives and things i use) sitting next to my desk. Keep writing! |
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