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Inside bruises
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:40:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Angry today
tomrrow its all ok
say something again
I'll walk away
bruises inside
deep to the core
we hide them there
razor sharp teeth
claw in the skin
marking the images
of hurt until hearts are paper thin
Bleeding out eyes
crying from pain
wishing it gone
wretched ones fall
while users stand tall
giving away the ones they use and decay
peace and hope
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-11-25 23:40:45]
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Re: Inside bruises
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:04:15 AM AEST
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Great writing.
We all have them.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Inside bruises
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:19:08 AM AEST
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Jenni this is really a sad write, it sucks when we feel like this.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Inside bruises
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:33:14 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it, well done |
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Re: Inside bruises
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by Black13 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 08:01:04 AM AEST
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| I loved this one especialy that last stanza. It was incredibly powerful. I don't understand your poems always... Maybe not how you meant them but I have pretty much always liked them. |
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Re: Inside bruises
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:22:57 AM AEST
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a very well expressed poem, yes we do all carry these around inside us *hugs* please know that you are not alone hun, emotional and sad poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Inside bruises
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:23:25 PM AEST
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| i loved this. this would make an excellent song. keep impressing. |
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