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brusing whats left of those
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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swaying inside to the corner of the eyes
lost in the fog
of the days passing by
dreaming of you
stuck on the losses
the causes of the silent hours
the darkness fell
inside of you
consuming souls
using and bruising
whats left of those that hurt and
nothing but pain exsists inside
Peace and hope
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
... [
2004-11-25 23:38:33]
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Re: brusing whats left of those
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by Black13 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:56:11 AM AEST
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I liked it. Short and simple but powerful.
"dreaming of you
stuck on the losses
the causes of the silent hours"
I liked those lines alot. |
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Re: brusing whats left of those
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:31:07 PM AEST
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Awesome understanding and writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Shows much compassion for others. |
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Re: brusing whats left of those
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:25:15 PM AEST
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| i agree with black13. excellent piece. this isnt as good as the other one on bruises, but not many pieces can compare to that one. |
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