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never there
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:11:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Where were you that night when I sat in the park and became something I'm not?
Why weren't you there when I lay cold, in the hospital... shivering and crying out i survived and where were you?
When I cried on your grave stone and my tears became blood from a wrist once drained before... where were you?
When I'm up all night screaming out so cold in pain, when I'm chucking myself into walls, taking my face you once loved and turning into a mangeled car wreck, where were you?
Where were you when the church bells rang and I preyed before your forever closing coffin and damnit I cried for you so long and where were you when you should have dried those tears, but you weren't there... where were you when I needed you most...
When I lay at the bottom of the bath filling it with my blood for your memory, the memory of where were you when you said you'd be there.
When I was with you, you where there, and when I dream and cry these sad songs where are you all this time when you werent here...
Just come back...
Why must you leave me here,
Why can't it be this way?
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Re: never there
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by AdamChantell on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:20:33 PM AEST
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| great imagery, very sad though. overall good write.. happy thanksgiving btw. |
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Re: never there
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:48:52 PM AEST
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this is a very sad write....it is an excellent on tho....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: never there
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:44:26 PM AEST
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very sad and powerful but a very good write
peace and hope
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Re: never there
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by parkman on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:29:22 AM AEST
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| a very sad and powerful write ty for sharing |
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Re: never there
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:46:34 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it, powerful.. |
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Re: never there
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:30:37 AM AEST
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such a very sad write, great poem tho.
Hugs,
Jane |
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