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Broken Home
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:23:20 PM in AEST
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The tears just wont seem to fall
You kick me when im down
You scold me like im a wounded dog
Im nothing but a piece of **** to you
Seems nothing I do or say is right
I cant take it anymore
I abhor the look of injoyment in your eyes
As you laugh at my Suicide
You point your finger and cry out in joy when you see the cuts
Placed so randomly on my arm
The table smeared with my blood
You dont notice
You scream at me to clean the mess you created
I cant take the pain of this broken home any longer
You are the one I am to look to
But it seems you wish my death
What is it that i have done
To desearve you abuse
The abuse I indure leaves no marks to show
It only leaves scars on my already battered mind
My mother watches with out saying a word
her binding Marriage seems to mean more
I just wish the pain to be gone
I hope I survive my broken home
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Re: Broken Home
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:29:38 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry that your life has to endure these things.
Hang in there as you'll be 18 soon enuff.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: Broken Home
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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Such intense pain. You are a strong soul to make it this far. I hope you can push on and keep on going. You are not alone. You'll be in my prayers.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Broken Home
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by SpeedXDemon on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:00:09 PM AEST
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| Your poem has a real emotion behind it, and it shows. However, be sure you look carefully over your poems before you post them, and use spell check, because there are multiple words spelt wrong in your poem. I enjoyed your poem, thanks for posting it. |
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Re: Broken Home
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:44:52 PM AEST
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| well im 15 also and i know how much home life impacts a person. dont let a broken home leave you broken because you always have the option to leave and go to some relatives. running away isnt a smart thing to do, its just running down a dead end... |
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Re: Broken Home
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by AdamChantell on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:26:29 PM AEST
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| i know alot of us that read this that have broken homes know what you're going though. hang in there! what does not kill you, will make you stonger, i'm a firm believer in that. |
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Re: Broken Home
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:30:02 AM AEST
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a very hard hitting write, powerful and sad,
pixie xx |
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