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Dear, My love
Contributed by
x0xlostgirlx0x
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dear, My love
Why couldnt you see
All the pain inside of me
Behind the fake smiles
A wall of tears
I plead for mercy
From all of my fears
My body was live
My heart was dead
Your voice was all i had in my head
I wanted your touch
I begged for your kiss
You are the only one
that i will miss
Im so sorry
For all of the times
i acted like i was
completely fine
Its not because of you
or anything you did
My sorrows were so
Perfectly hid
You dont understand
but i do
You were too blind to see
what they did to me
My heart said yes
But my body
said no
My
final choice is
I have to go
I clutched the knife
I said no
The pills make it longer
till i have to go
I swallowed them down
I was so afraid
I closed my eyes
Then i prayed
I put my head down
And lied still
I had no more hope
no more will
My head was spinning
i could barely see
Your picture i held
right in front of me
I couldnt stand up
But i wanted to try
I was too blind from
all the tears in my eyes
I wiped them away
And held on strong
I was slowly slipping
It wouldnt be long
Your picture i clutched
so close to me
It was the last thing i would ever see
I lied very still
I was on my way
Tomorrow would be
a brighter day
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x0xlostgirlx0x
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2004-11-25 19:42:20]
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Re: Dear, My love
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:44:36 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Dear, My love
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:17:32 PM AEST
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great write,
keep on writing
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Dear, My love
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by DamentedSuicide on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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wonderfull rite
~~~Raven~~~
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Re: Dear, My love
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:30:38 AM AEST
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very well expressed,
pixie xx |
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