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dwell
Contributed by
angel_eyez
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My love for you is like a whittled old flower
A burnt out candle
And seeing the sun in the middle of the night
None existent
It died a time ago
When you changed
Was it her
Or was it me
Only time can tell
Your miles from me now
For I can no longer dwell
On the pain of you and me
Copyright ©
angel_eyez
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2004-11-25 17:19:51]
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Re: dwell
(User Rating: 1 )
by nascarfive on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:10:04 PM AEST
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| sorry you feel this way, but it makes nice poetry. |
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Re: dwell
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by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:15:52 AM AEST
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That's a really nice poem. Good job.
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