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Choice Passages
Contributed by
fionndruinne
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:36:19 PM in AEST
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As life’s sand passes underfoot
Fleeting days carry their pages over
Leaving me trying to see so quickly
And leafing through chapters passed.
In them I find choice passages
Many things to warm the heart -
And so often the heart needs warming
With winter’s hand coming on.
Words of wonders, fast enshrined
To be remembered; stars in the sky
That never allow the cold to come;
Lamps, given, set in their places.
Warm hearts kindle a smile
Brightest stars among the rest
Seldom is their radiance far from mind
Forgotten in neither zephyr nor gale.
Those lines go deeper than the page
As I bring the book to hand
Binding the image of smiling hearts
Where the cold cannot carry.
May the sun shine on us all
When the winds bring us together,
And a song built of olden words and deeds
Sound in our ears in the silence.
**
“Hear the anchor sinking, voices ringing clear
Farewell from my kindred, and friends I love so dear…
…and friends I love so dear.”
-Clannad, Journey’s End
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:42:57 PM AEST
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Warming, and worth the all the reads It shall get in future.
I'd been perusing your collection today, wondering when you'd next post - and here you are.. .
"And so often the heart needs warming
With winter’s hand coming on."
Too true. |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:48:27 PM AEST
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*pouts* I wanted to be the first comment. lol
Well Andrew, since you sent this to me I've read it six times. And I will probably read it over and over again for a very long time.
It is a very beautiful poem, one of my new favourites (as all your poems seem to become) and something that will definatly warm my heart.
I am in awe.
Thanks, my friend.
*hugs you tons*
Phil xxx |
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:49:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, Andrew... I can picture the hearth now.. a group waiting for their hero to come home, and he returns simply without fanfare, to the ones he loves most..the warrior's heart is warmed by friends and family...
It is a rather sentimental piece for you, out of the ordnary, but nicely done. God bless.
Em |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by nascarfive on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
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Seldom is their radiance far from mind
Forgotten in neither zephyr nor gale.
this line is simply .. gorgeous. |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:33:37 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful.... Great write..
Jenni |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:41:30 PM AEST
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Yes, I'd have to agree with Emily. That was quite sentimental. What happened to the cold-hearted beast I've always known? Well, I guess anyone can change after having a friend like me. Boy, are you lucky. Okay, sorry for the silly comment. Yes, of course I loved this piece. I like the few different comparisons that are alive throughout the poem. So, I guess it was rather nice.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:42:31 AM AEST
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this took my breath away, amazing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:21:14 PM AEST
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"Those lines go deeper than the page"
As do these, Andrew... as do these.
Your journey through heart and mind always seems to prod a bit of gentle longing. Your 'now' is so rich with past and so tied to future... I cannot help but feel emotion as I read your work. This is simply beautiful.
Again moved,
~SNM~ |
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:57:36 PM AEST
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I feel a chill in the air, but a warmth in the heart. Very nice, Andrew. I always smile when I think of your writes.
Stitch |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:08:19 AM AEST
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Andrew if they ever did a list of top 10 poets on this site, it would be a traversty if you weren't in the top 3. Another awesome write.
Johnny. |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:18:10 AM AEST
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Another absolutely lovely write...
This has such depth and maturity- have no words to describe the beauty and the meaning in this. I guess the poem itself says it all.
Just like the lines you speak about-- the lines you write go so much 'deeper than the page'.
God bless... |
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:05:41 PM AEST
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for some reason unknown to me..this made me cry..
maybe its beauty..I don't know. I wish I could write something beautiful..rare like a jewel that shines..ya know? yes, you do. |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:09:23 PM AEST
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Andrew,
How this warmed me. It is quite cold outside tonight, but inside,
it's warm, and cozy and oh! how the light doth shine ever so bright.
I was so touched by the depth of your words.
This was beautifully sweet.
~Breezy
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Re: Choice Passages
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:02:11 PM AEST
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Well better late than never.
what can i say but a heavenly masterpeice of sheer beauty?
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:28:12 PM AEST
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Yes, yes, very good. I've come to the point where I don't expect nothing less, so no great surprise. Yeah, just ordinary...
Take care,
David |
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Re: Choice Passages
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 06:30:51 AM AEST
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enjoying your reference to Clannad at the end of the piece.
But this lives on with or without Clannad:)
you have a great heart |
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