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Secretwind
Contributed by
givingin
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:20:24 PM in AEST
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The words you say,
make my knees weak,
I hope some day,
that we may speak.
Eye to eye,
face to face,
I hope that we,
may find our place.
I write to you,
each day at school,
my heart you take,
my mind you fool.
I wonder who,
you really are,
if you’re for real,
if you live far?
If you’re a lie,
my heart you’ll break,
if I find out,
that you’re a fake.
Don’t tease my soul,
or torment my mind,
if you’re a fake,
then I am blind.
Your words sound true,
so deep in touch,
these feelings inside,
are all so much.
My mystery,
my secretwind,
I think of you,
from: givingin.
Copyright ©
givingin
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2004-11-25 12:20:24]
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Re: Secretwind
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by pixie on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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awwww this is lovely, so sweet, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Secretwind
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:53:51 PM AEST
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Well, this was nice. Ive read a lot of his poetry.
I felt myself getting pulled in a little. |
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Re: Secretwind
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:11:48 PM AEST
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| very nice. great write. |
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Re: Secretwind
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by secretwind on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:31:51 PM AEST
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Forever your friend
The Wind.... |
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