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A Seemingly Perfect Daughter

Contributed by eternalnight4x on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:41:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You’re their perfect daughter
That can do no wrong
Receiving all attention
And their love most long

Insidious by nature
Innocence you feign
Draining all their love
Until none’s left to gain

Manipulating them till your
Every need’s met
They allow your mistakes
But mine they reject

To them you’re wonderful
Perfect in every way
They adore you more
Each lingering day

They perceive you as kind
And thoughtful to all
Yet I know this compassion
Truly is false

You pretend to be something
That you are not
I truly hope that in
Hell you will rot

But sisters are suppose to cherish
Each another
But how can I when all you’ve
Been is a bother?

You have control of their actions
And how they will think
With your insincere kindness
They have begun to sink

Now all that they see are you’re
Excellent grades
And the clean house that you
Had made

How you excel at everything
You do and you try
They can never see past
You’re flawless lies

However I can see past
You’re false intents
I can shatter you’re walls
While the rest only dent

I see the real you under
You’re layers of masks
How long did you think this
Charade would last?

You feign all you’re actions
And the things that you do
Although you’re my sister
I truly hate you

Copyright Â© eternalnight4x ... [ 2004-11-25 11:41:23]
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Re: A Seemingly Perfect Daughter (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:14:41 PM AEST
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powerful and angry write. well written in all aspects. maybe your parents will quit taking her lies hook, line, and sinker by wising up to the bait she uses.

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