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My Lonely River
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:50:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please ease me flowing river of tears,
Please protect my heart from all life’s spears,
I can’t fight it alone anymore,
In you I thought I’d found my cure.
As I sail down this river of shattered dreams,
Things are the worst that they’ve ever been,
I am lost I have no paddle,
My beautiful horse has lost its saddle.
On the horizon is nothing for me but pain,
That keeps spinning out again & again,
I look, trying, hoping to see someone,
I reach up high to touch the sun.
But it has gone, vanished from my sky,
In my ears ring the words goodbye,
Everyone is leaving, leaving me behind,
Here I am alone stuck in the daily grind.
My tears go unseen & unheard,
I can no longer see my eyesight’s now blurred,
I keep on wiping, but they keep on falling,
To my heart I hear sadness calling.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-25 10:50:33]
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Re: My Lonely River
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by givingin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:26:05 PM AEST
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awwww,
I luv you pixie...
*tear*
*hug*
good write
*~givingin~* |
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Re: My Lonely River
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by givingin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:29:49 PM AEST
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awwww,
I luv you pixie...
*tear*
*hug*
good write
*~givingin~* |
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Re: My Lonely River
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:45:54 PM AEST
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beautiful pix... in many ways I can relate... so often I sail down this river...
hey, you're not going it alone-- I am sailing with yoiu.
--em |
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Re: My Lonely River
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. |
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Re: My Lonely River
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:33:01 PM AEST
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Aah..my dearest girl..this is quite amazing..beautifully sad..yet sublime..
very talented you are..god bless..
hugs and love. :-) venkat |
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Re: My Lonely River
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:40:09 PM AEST
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So sad but remarkably written.
I'm alone but with all u folks out here in my global family I'm never alone.
luv, huggs, hang tuff,
emy |
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