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Goal
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Alone is what I am
Pain is what I feel
Sadness is my life
Death is now my goal
Empty are my lungs
Of breath that he stole
Sadness is my life
Death is now my goal
Cold is what my heart is
Empty are my eyes
Sadness is my life
Death is now my goal
Try is what you did
Failure is what you became
Sadness is my life
Death is now my goal
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Jen54
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2004-11-25 10:48:55]
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Re: Goal
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:03:18 AM AEST
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oh, so sad!
i can relate to these feelings and emotions in many ways...
keep up writing!
you're good...! |
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Re: Goal
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:20:09 PM AEST
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| i thought this was a little too repetetive, but other than that this was a great poem. keep it up. |
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Re: Goal
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:00:26 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: Goal
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:48:19 AM AEST
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| Is it a mere coincidence that so many people in this world share the same thoughts, the same feelings and the same emotions for someone else? Are we all really strangers to each other or are we all so intertwined as a race that the cosmic meaning of it all has us holding each others thoughts as fate would have it? Am I making sense? Are these all rhetorical questions? I do not know as I could just be babbling as usual. But this poem went straight to my heart; especially when I look at the date in time it was submitted. It is a sad poem of course but I was going through this same state of mind back in November. Now don’t believe I am suicidal or something but sometimes I guess some of these depressing feelings make me think what would it matter if I was just gone? Just let me the ____ out of here. I can’t handle all this pressure. Would the world really miss me and does anyone care? Na….. forget these heavy hard hitting feelings….just started smoking and took the slow way out…lol ;-} Anyway, I think this is a really great poem for more reasons than I can possibly explain. |
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