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Stained with rust…
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:21:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This week end’s planned.
Stayin’ round a mates.
I’m gonna get out,
And have some space.
This week end’s panned.
NO over dose or slits.
My friend’s put out her hand.
Given me some grip.
This week end I was gonna,
Slit my skin to spill red.
Disappear on a runner,
Before taking pills again.
This week end was planned,
Then my mate stepped in.
She’s given me a strand,
And some place to begin…
She’s doing what she can,
She’s got her crap too.
She understands,
These problems just grow.
I can’t believe she’s here.
I can’t believe my luck.
But it’s bringing on tears,
‘Coz I’m too stained with rust…
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deathdrop
... [
2004-11-25 10:21:58]
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Re: Stained with rust…
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by pixie on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:52:04 AM AEST
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awww I know how it is to feel stained *hugs* a very wel composed emotionally deep write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Stained with rust…
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:21:46 PM AEST
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| powerful write rosie. |
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Re: Stained with rust…
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:57:22 AM AEST
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powerful stuff, affected me quite deeply.
nice write, moving and heartfelt x |
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