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tragic love
Contributed by
veenu
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:42:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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no, you are thinking abide,
i know ,love for me ,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still,
dear i have to die;
cancer can't even touch my soul,
stop tear's they can sink the world whole;
after death i will be a star,
breath near you while i will be too much far;
when you will give me an eye,
i will give a little shy;
and i will twinkle my eyes,
in order to tell you iam survive,
i know,love for me ,
with in u cant hide,
but still...but still,
dear i have to die......................
but ,dear ,but about the solitude,
the moments without you will be rude;
always i will keep my eyes on you,
one day our dreams will come true;
you are saying true ,i know ,
but still dear, i have to go... i have to go;
on every step of you i will be your guide,
i know ,love for me,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still
dear i have to die........
Copyright ©
veenu
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2004-11-25 02:42:51]
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Re: tragic love
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:36:22 AM AEST
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Tragic Love
For all the times you lied
a scare appeared on my heart
For all the times you said it wouldnt happen again
you were tearing me apart
For every fist that landed upon my face
i told myself i would leave this place
For all the times i tried to die
For all these times i say GOODBYE!
Ren*
Copyright © Renstar ... [2004-10-28 15:47:56]
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Re: tragic love
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
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This is a great write with great effort
I have a poem that has taken me my whole life to think of an eternity to write it is for my father |
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Re: tragic love
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:37:35 AM AEST
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| But still, But still.. Idunno i like it u know but still hehe keep it up |
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