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Bleeding Tears
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:08:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Bleeding tears, streaming down her face.
Because now she has been put into her place..
A bloody rose lie on her.
A crimson liquid flowly from her lip...
The black her, as dark as the night sky...
A ring on her finger....such a way to die.
Cutting wasn't enough, so she moved to pills.
Neither was that so she moved to shooting.
Twisted her mind up, with a rope around her neck.
Hanging from a tree in her parents yard...
Such a sight to see, such a way to die.
There will never be a next time for him to make her cry...
--I'm sorry mum, and I'm sorry dad...but this is what happens when your eternally sad...--
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:11:19 PM AEST
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| its kinda a chain that lead to her i never want this to happen to you |
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:34:47 PM AEST
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| very well written. so much is held within the lines of this poem. Good job. |
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:05:37 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by pixie on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:33:53 AM AEST
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wow that was brilliantly written, very sad write, deep,
pixie xx |
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by clotti on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:10:51 PM AEST
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| when something starts it just progresses on and on, when something is no longer a relief, you turn to something else, you wirte well i hope you keep it up i like you style clotti |
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