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Rain Land
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The tears from my eyes,
falls like the rain.
I step outside,
hoping to hide my pain.
The rain falls faster,
beating down on my face.
I look around and wonder,
how I got to this place.
So new and unknown to me.
I keep looking around,
until I find thee.
You take me by the hand,
Kiss me and welcome me to your land.
Copyright ©
witch_derna
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2004-11-24 20:54:07]
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Re: Rain Land
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:12:15 PM AEST
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Short but beautiful, I love how you describe the rain as hiding your tears.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Rain Land
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by pixie on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:35:41 AM AEST
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awww Madonna this is written beautifully.
pixie xx |
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Re: Rain Land
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:52:35 AM AEST
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| This reminds me a lot of something I would have written... good job! |
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Re: Rain Land
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:37:43 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and short. Gets all of your emotions out through the words you choose to express your self very well written.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Rain Land
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:09:40 AM AEST
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I hope i have ease your pain somewhat.
I hope you will let me dry your eyes.
Come here and take my hand and we shall find a new land,
Free from pain,
Free from tears.
I LOVE YOU
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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