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Do you enjoy hurting me?
Contributed by
babygurl33
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Do you enjoy hurting me?
Why can’t you just let me be?
You took my heart,
You tore it apart.
I thought you loved me,
I just wish I could have seen.
Now you’re gone and I’ll never get you back,
I just wish I’d die or have heartache.
Sometimes I sit in my room and cry,
Thinking of how I want to die.
I bet you think this is funny don’t you?
What is there left for me to do?
Now you’re gone and out of my life,
You gave me a lot of strife.
But it’s ok because what goes around comes around,
And I know one day you’ll be on the ground.
Goodbye for now,
This is my solemn vowel.
I just wish you could have been true,
Even though you weren’t I still love you.
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babygurl33
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2004-11-24 20:33:28]
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Re: Do you enjoy hurting me?
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:55:33 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. written well. |
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Re: Do you enjoy hurting me?
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by Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:22:52 AM AEST
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so written from your heart my dear. Powerful and emotional. Nicely done. In time, and yes in time, the truth will reveal itself more and your heart will heal, and find new strength in new friendships that could lead to another love. We live and learn thru the hurts, pains and experience thru these times will make you stronger. take care,
Amber Rose Yeager
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Re: Do you enjoy hurting me?
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:00:56 PM AEST
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Your pain really does flow out in this one.
One day you will find your true love, then you will look back at the past and smile
Take care
Steve |
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Re: Do you enjoy hurting me?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 03:43:31 PM AEST
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| You are probably sick of hearing this but I TRULY know how you feel. I knew these two people whom I really cared for and had always looked forward to getting email from them. I thought i had a pretty good rapport with them despitre some bumps. One day, however, they stopped emailing me. i tried emailing them to get them to respond back but they haven't to this day. i know this is supposed to be about YOU but im just trying to prove that i truly know how you feel. this whole experoience makes me feel that they as well enjoy hurting me. This was an awesome write and i hope you write more! |
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