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You Don't See It
Contributed by
shattered_heart
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:51:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You don't see the way I look at you,
the way I look into your eyes.
Only trying to find some love,
that is always within hide.
You don't see that I dream,
of things that could be.
Reality that it will never happen,
because you will never see.
You don't see that I try to show,
how much you really mean.
A great friend within my life,
but no more than what we've always been.
Copyright ©
shattered_heart
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2004-11-24 19:51:21]
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Re: You Don't See It
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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This is why girls should ask guys out.
It would develop more self-esteem maybe.
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Re: You Don't See It
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by Niccy on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:33:24 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel, I like this guy that I'm really good friends with too and wish we were closer. That was a really good poem. |
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Re: You Don't See It
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:45:51 PM AEST
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Lovely write....I can identify with it...
Jenni |
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Re: You Don't See It
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:27:59 AM AEST
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| Nice poem...what a dilemma...because if you don't tell him, this is where you are stuck. But if you do, then if things don't work out, the friendship may be awkward afterwards...yeah, that's a hard one. Good luck to you and keep on writing! |
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Re: You Don't See It
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:06:13 PM AEST
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There is always hope.
For me, I hope you get what you want
Take care
Steve |
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Re: You Don't See It
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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| pll never see and we are never fully appreciated and even when we are we don t feel that way |
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