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Sometimes
Contributed by
xbleedingheart
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:12:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes I think about everything I was taught,
About right and wrong,
About good and evil.
Sometimes I make no sense of all I know.
I doubt all my parent have ever said,
And all my teachers have ever preached.
Sometimes I look in a mirror,
And see everyone else's dreams staring back.
I see nothing but a badly drawn girl,
Waiting to erase her past,
Of careless mistakes
And apathetic relationships.
Sometimes I imagine a place
Where memories are forgotten
Where castles are built
And where no one has heard of the word erstwhile.
And where there has never been lie,
But then i realize there would be too hurt.
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xbleedingheart
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2004-11-24 19:12:02]
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Re: Sometimes
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by Gimpie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:25:47 PM AEST
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| I like the style of this...you have a good thought process and it was an all around good poem. |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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