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At The Lonely Street With You
Contributed by
alexz
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:41:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was walking at the lonely street and I saw you.
I stared at your gleaming eyes,
Which gave me a question to realize.
Am I dreaming or can this be true?
That you and I are meant for each other.
You promised me and I did likewise.
The love we felt seemed to last forever.
But then you made a decision that wasn’t clever.
“Goodbye, I’m sorry”, was all that you said.
Leaving me all alone, crying in my bed.
After that, someone else owned you.
I approached you and these words came out.
“Why did you leave me?” I cried out loud,
Realizing that was a terrible thing to do,
I just left and walked alone at the lonely street.
When I saw you with that “someone”
I realized that there was something left undone.
To tell you that my feelings were sincere,
And losing you was my greatest fear.
Can I tell you all this without shedding a tear?
Why can’t I get you off my head?
Even if I know that you love someone else.
I hope I can tell you “I love you,” again.
But some things are better left unsaid.
I hope you can love me the same way you did then.
You and I finally had a chance to meet.
As I saw you at the lonely street,
My heart gave the strangest beat.
You smiled at me and I had a weird feeling
Love for me hasn’t lost it’s meaning.
“I still love you and I’ll wait,” I finally said.
You stared at me and my face turned red.
“I feel the same,” was your reply.
I felt confused I did not know why.
The street didn’t feel lonely for a while.
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Re: At The Lonely Street With You
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by xbleedingheart on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:24:33 PM AEST
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| the emotion in this poem is really strong. i don't think it was written really good but its very strong. |
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Re: At The Lonely Street With You
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:43:12 PM AEST
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| good write. =] |
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