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fell in love
Contributed by
angel_eyez
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The Stars are shining brightly
As we both lay there
Underneath the the moonlit sky
With your long dark hair
I find you eyes so charming
When they are so blue
And at that very moment
I fell in love with you
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angel_eyez
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2004-11-24 17:13:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: fell in love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:21:32 PM AEST (User
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sweet lovely poem! |
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Re: fell in love
(User Rating: 1 ) by sunshiny on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:37:32 AM AEST (User
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Short and sweet! I like the last line...good job! |
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