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Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:08:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's dark and gloomy here where i am here to converse with my shadow. It is lonely here, and the cold makes me shiver. I wish you were here to hold me. I thought you were my one and only, I did believe you cared. so why did you hurt me, and watch me fall. When i thought that you would catch me..... so here i am dieing because you left me here...alone
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Re: you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:23:50 PM AEST
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| short sad poem keep the good work up! |
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Re: you
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:48:52 PM AEST
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| i fell once too and felt alone i sometimes still do |
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Re: you
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 04:49:15 PM AEST
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| good write i fell too and im still lyin there and im always alone keep it up |
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Re: you
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:08:20 PM AEST
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"so here i am dieing because you left me here...alone" i love that, its totally like something i would write, its a great ending, to a great poem
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