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my goodbyes
Contributed by
moon_light
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:05:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Goodbye dear ones.
Goodbye to you all.
My time has come,
this great fall.
I know it's not fair.
But, in your heart i'm
still thare.
''feal no sorrow do not greav''
In time the gifts
of my life
you will receve.
Never let go.
For pain you will never know.
Goodbye everyone
It's my time.
Copyright ©
moon_light
... [
2004-11-24 17:05:03]
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Re: my goodbyes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:22:54 PM AEST
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Well I certainly hope this is jus writing.
Very well said even tho heart breacking.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: my goodbyes
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:09:34 PM AEST
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| i agree with emy. i hope all well start to go well. good write. |
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Re: my goodbyes
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:54:57 AM AEST
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from the auther. i wrote this after a friend died.
thanks for your concern.
lov moonlight. |
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Re: my goodbyes
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by thumper on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:08:21 AM AEST
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This was a very nice tribute to Shane. It was a shock that someone so special left us so suddenly. They always say the good die young, and in his case, it is so true. May he rest in peace. It may have been short and sweet, but it said so much. Great Job, moon.
Love you,
Gramma Thumps |
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Re: my goodbyes
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:26:07 PM AEST
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hey jen good write but doesnt sound like your ussail one well im putting some more up soon i hope so check every now and than and give your cooments well g2g bye
DEMON |
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Re: my goodbyes
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by Baby_Grl on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:16:36 PM AEST
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Hey Jen, This poem was sweet and nice. It really brought tears to my eyes. It brought back the memories Shane and I had. I really miss him. Its a better poem than mine. Good Job sis.
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