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Realisation
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:23:35 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I thought I no longer walked alone,
But no you left me at my headstone.
I stand above my open grave,
Staring at what I once used to crave.
Is death really what I wanted? Now I look down at what I was,
When I was completely at a loss.
The hate filled child I once was, is no longer,
I’m now young adult, I feel much stronger.
I sit an observe what I once used to be,
I find it hard to believe what my eyes are letting me see.
Almost throwing away something as precious as my life,
Always flirting with the blade of that knife.
Pushing away the ones I love,
With such a forceful emotional shove.
I never realised the potential I now hold
It is hard to believe I used to be so cold.
Realisation has taken time to make itself known,
Feels kind of like my milestone.
I found my light finally.
I feel more carefree….
SJ
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Re: Realisation
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by Mangs on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:16:41 PM AEST
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Absolutely loved this one....just shows how far youve come as a person....im proud of u hun..
Love,
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Re: Realisation
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:26:32 PM AEST
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such a great write bro...i sit back and realize everything too, but i'm far to stuck in what i've come to believe to even lt myself have a chance...in a world that i hardly believe in...
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Re: Realisation
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:15:28 PM AEST
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Awesome maserpeice that will help others find hope.
Keep up the great writing, genna as there are many out there hurt and suffereing.
luv, huggs, strength,
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Re: Realisation
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by Catalina on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:35:44 PM AEST
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YES! I related so much to this write. It's so hard to see ourselves as we are not what we think we are. Perception is most of it.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: Realisation
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:12:29 PM AEST
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hey this is really a great write you are a brilliant poet i have been through the same and have not cut for moths now coz of my friends i have been saved and no longer seek the blade
though i did come close last night on my birthday well i hope you are ok and keep writing |
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Re: Realisation
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. very good indeed. |
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