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Fake LOVE
Contributed by
givingin
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Get out of my mind,
I don’t want you no more,
I want you to stop,
I am not your whore!
Get out, get out!
I don’t want you here,
your body so sweet,
but your mind I fear.
I want you so bad,
but I can’t come to see,
you treated me wrong,
how could we be.
I want you right now,
come caress me once more,
I was so young,
my heart is now torn.
You said all the things,
I wanted to here,
but you took only body,
my heart you did fear.
I am so alone now,
but your still around,
my heart is now empty,
and love is not found.
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givingin
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2004-11-24 12:25:15]
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:26:40 PM AEST
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a very sad write, heartfelt and deep, *hug*
pixie xx |
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:33:51 PM AEST
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I know how you feel...I really do...but you just gotta carry on and someday, one day, things will start to get better. It will probably get more worse before it starts to get better, but after that things will start to look up. Theres plenty more fish in the sea...even if it feels like theres only him and hes the only one for you, this wouldn't have happened if you were made for each other...you just gotta carry on and get on with things, and one day you'll see you were better off without him...well, apparently that happens anyway.
Enough with my rambling. Lovely write. I love the last paragraph, very beautiful.
cat xxxxx |
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:54:18 PM AEST
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| wow this is so very sad and i can relate to all to well i posted a poem today that runs somewhere along these all too honest lines the title is My Heart Is In A Gilded Cage you can find it on the ypdc home i just posted it |
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:16:37 PM AEST
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vedry emotional write... yet a very good one...came from the heart
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:09:04 PM AEST
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i felt this way about year and half ago,
this is avery emotional write.but expressed with such excellence.
take care of urself...
PM me if u ever need sum 1 to lend and ear or shoulder.
love
Gen xx |
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:47:16 PM AEST
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awww I'm sorry to hear that hun.
very emotional write.
most people go through this, I did as well, but you go on with life, no matter how hard it may seem. Just remember pain is like a sundae ^.^
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Fake LOVE
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by secretwind on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:48:03 PM AEST
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oh so sad
who would hurt someone so cute as you?
hang on
your time will come
soon....
The Wind..... |
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