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Home At Last
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm giving up, I'm dieing fast.
Fading away from everything.
It's finally over, home at last.
No more pain, no more suffering.
Just floating here in nothingness.
Smiling brightly,
but
crying silently
I wish I woudn't have done it.
I wish you could have stopped me
I took my life, to much pain for me.
I couldn't take it. It didn't hurt.
It stung a little bit at first.
but, don't worry I'm better now.
No depression, no more tears or fears.
Where are you? you plead to yourself through your silent tears.
Here I am floating in nothingness.
I gave up, it's finally over.
I'm home at last.
Copyright ©
Lovely_4_steve
... [
2004-11-24 12:19:26]
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Re: Home At Last
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:21:38 PM AEST
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well composed, but very sad and emotional,
pixie xx
and no it doesnt suck... |
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Re: Home At Last
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:58:53 PM AEST
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| sometimes i wish i had as much luck when trying to take my life but i am glad i did not die there are alot of pll who need me and i am sure there are ppl who need you too |
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Re: Home At Last
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:03:37 PM AEST
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| excellent write. life seems to only be a death sentence, but might as well enjoy this worldy prison... |
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