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Contributed by
Dominick-destruction
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:08:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My dilated pupils are much like the black scrying mirrors...
& surrounded by a network of irriatted fine scarlet lines against a white background...
I whisper here in the dark, alone...
I whisper through my teeth..
And sitting in the silence
I hear whut they dare not speak.
..& I bleed,
..I bleed like over-ripe Berries,
slithering down my legs
& staining my skin in shades of Bruised purples...
..perplexed...
..Whineing & screaming..
As the thoughts buzz in my head like 27 vexed wasps
Caught in a butterfly net.
All these unclear visions,
A milky white
Like Cataracts in the eyes of lies..
..So hard to see through...
My fevered Imagination goes on...
I try & drown it out
But i still hear it.
I try to scratch it away..
But i still feel it...
..Still sitting there watching me..
I see her,
over there,
..In the corner.
...She wears a voodoo pin filled heart on her sleeve
& she's stotic inside...
..My love..
She feeds me Strawberries & Cyanide.
She makes my scabs itch,
She makes my nerves twitch.
...But i love her...
...how i do love her...
(C) Dominick Destruction 2004
Copyright ©
Dominick-destruction
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2004-11-24 11:08:13]
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:09:07 AM AEST
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very good dark write, you have a very unique style,
pixie x |
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST
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| twisted however so alluring... beautifully strange and wondrous |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:10:42 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Awesomely written.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:07:32 PM AEST
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| very interesting. =] |
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by NobodySpecial on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:18:11 PM AEST
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| the beginning kinda reminded me of somebody tweaking. Very good write. |
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by EternalNight4x on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:08:32 PM AEST
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| a very creative and interesting write...well written keep on posting |
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