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Needing to Know
Contributed by
Dominick-destruction
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:04:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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....This fever inside here is raging...
Bird talons scratching on their chrome cageing...
..Trying to drown it out...holding it under with all my strength invoked...
..It's smirking face..it only serves to provoke...
...Bulid my rage...& raze it back to dust noir...
..Recycled inside...give me more...give me more...
..Feed my greed...water this angry little seed..
and let it grow...grow...
into something ...terrifying to every foe...
..I'll hunt you down..
..I have your scent..
..It burns like chemical fumes in my nostrals...
...The slight seething pain along my membrains makes me hostal...
..Please glue these eyes shut & weave up my eyelashes...
....bind my hands behind me so i can't scratch the rashes..
..& spread the angry red inflamination..
..Beacuse you know i would without the slightest hesitatation...
....But i need to know!!!!...
...or i'll be plauged by the same torturing thoughts over & over...
..I need that which i seek...
My questions cry out to be fed awnswers like a nest of open hungry beaks...
..Dare i ask.....Or stay insane?...
..And if they confirm my intutions whut would i gain?...
..Should i even consider this my problem now?..
....after all...i've gotten whut i wanted...
..along with a reason to ease my gulit over the issue...
..so now i'll just leave it to you..
...
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..
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.....But she won't...
..She wants the truth..and she wants it now!!!!...
(c) Dominick Destruction 27/08/04
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Re: Needing to Know
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:11:05 AM AEST
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man that was great...answers and the truth i hate them both, yet i need them so very much!
please comment on my work too
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Re: Needing to Know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:33:10 PM AEST
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Good use of rhymes. I particularly liked seeing hostile and nostril - even though you mis-spelled one of them.
Keep writing, Dominick. |
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Re: Needing to Know
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:17:01 PM AEST
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| keep writing i love your work |
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Re: Needing to Know
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:09:26 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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