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Affection
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:16:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Yes, such a glorious word…
But such a foreign word to us…
Our house…
Is so dark…
Light never shines this magnificent word upon us…
Love,
Without affection…or attention
Time spent with no knowledge of what could’ve been
If this world only existed
Within our reach
If we only knew how much
That word really meant
How it conquered many
But destroyed others
From its lack of use
If only such a word
Could beam down upon us…
Imagine what it could do…
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-11-24 10:16:23]
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Re: Affection
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:27:41 PM AEST
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| great write. very true. |
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Re: Affection
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:44:25 PM AEST
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| the lack of it can destroy people, but the over use or misinterpretation can make a person just as cold and bitter. love is a difficult thing, there is no rules or limits on love which makes it hard to put into a tangible meaning. anywho this is a great write, very.....well.........cold. good stuff here. |
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Re: Affection
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by ForgottenTear on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:21:59 PM AEST
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you describe it perfectly, it can be the best gift and sometimes the biggest flaw. Very good poem i enjoyed it :D
-Bex |
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