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My sunrise
Contributed by
ManInTheMAsk
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:23:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You make me smile like a sunrise,
Stomach feels all funny with butterflies.
Massive grin, cuddles you tight
Trying to hide feelings I can not fight.
Wonderful… is not good enough for you,
Heck your absolutely fabulous trust me it’s true.
Making me laugh, and knowing you really care
Actually wishing I could be there.
I can’t do much being so far away,
But my heart is with you each and every day.
You have a beauty so amazing within,
Totally hypnotised you’ve sucked me in.
Thinking it’s crazy I never knew you,
Yet we seem to fit like the perfect shoe.
I don’t want to lose you my precious friend,
I will be here for you till the end.
Another smile creeps across my face,
Thinking of you as I stare into space.
Milady I truly care,
Just wish I had the words for me to share.
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ManInTheMAsk
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2004-11-24 09:23:21]
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Re: My sunrise
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:23:53 AM AEST
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awww how lovely, made me smile when i read this,
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Re: My sunrise
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by Gimpie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:34:35 AM AEST
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| This is really sweet :) beautiful write. |
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Re: My sunrise
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:47:29 AM AEST
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very sweet write
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Re: My sunrise
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:51:19 AM AEST
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I am feeling all you wrote...Beautifully done...Let's Hope it always last!!!
Shari :) |
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Re: My sunrise
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:49:31 PM AEST
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Beautifully done!! I really enjoy reading your poems...can't wait to read the rest.
Tanya |
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