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time on my hands
Contributed by
rie
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:52:57 AM in AEST
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sprinkle the dust, let go of the fear.
talk of the pain, share the burden.
give up the draining , sinking feeling.
sinking, sinking, let go take on the feeling.
no more holding on, go on go with the feeling.
falling, falling, my fear is of falling.
clouds reach out to meet me i'm no longer falling.
this angel, my angel the message is clear,
get on with my life let go of my fear.
your close to my heart, and whisper in my ear.
Copyright ©
rie
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2004-11-24 07:52:57]
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Re: time on my hands
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by Shadow on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:25:53 AM AEST
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This was a good poem. It expressed on thing that i think alot of people have trouble with or maybe just me. It's hard to let a person get close to you. This is well written and it has a moving meaning.
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Re: time on my hands
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:41:37 AM AEST
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so well composed, a great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: time on my hands
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:15:56 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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