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Rolling Thunder
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:35:34 AM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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Your Laugh.
Like rolling thunder in the distance.
Clearing your throat with a gentle roll.
I don't think I've ever loved you as much as I do now.
Your Smile.
Not exactly perfect. Toothy and joyful.
Your tounge sneaks between your teeth.
I knew that nothing could stop this.
Your Heart.
Pink and fleshy, beating quickly.
Warm liquid flows through it passages.
Cold and hard as stone.
You never loved me.
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2004-11-24 07:35:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rolling Thunder
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:40:39 AM AEST (User
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awwww that was so delicate and loving,
pixie xx |
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Re: Rolling Thunder
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:29:26 PM AEST (User
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I agree with pixie, very delicate and loving. Nice job. |
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