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Could he be Mine
Contributed by
mia
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:06:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The fire burns
The romance burns up
I feel his heat racing,
while mine does aswell
Is this going to be my first?
Is this the right time?
I know he loves me, he truley does
Butterflys flatter in my stomach as he leans in
I kiss him & he kisses back
I love the touch warth & beauty of my man
I couldn't wait to go a little further
The fire grows high
& his hand moves closer
& It what happend next........
Was the best thing that ever happend
I now know his always going to be mine
Copyright ©
mia
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2004-11-24 04:06:02]
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Re: Could he be Mine
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:17:00 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet. Its so real and pure i love the way you wrote it down, its such a speacial poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Could he be Mine
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:57:14 AM AEST
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very sweet and loving write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Could he be Mine
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:19:06 AM AEST
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| very sweet...I have been having those same feelings....you express them beautifully....shari |
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