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War
Contributed by
b_rand
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:09:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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pause at the ...'s for perfect flow.
i think this describes my parents divorce perfectly
i live in two houses, in a broken home...
both in the same town on Emotional Road
the anger just drains out, but where does it go?
i get to taste how two enemies roll
allow me to space out and leave where i am
i'm ordered to choose sides but don't think i can
you say to stay neutral, but don't understand
if you love others equal, then you become bad
so me being home doesn't happen that often...
i hate my parents when they wish the other a coffin
i know that i've hardened, but they say that i've softened
maybe cuz between the two i always feel so exhausted
i need for a timeout, one to just lie down
i need to catch my breath before i scream or i cry out
i'm under so much stress that it seems that i've died out
and i am so depressed that i am bleeding inside out
so now you can see into the life that i lead...
when i look at writing, i see a way to relieve
through all this fighting and the words that i weave
i feel that i've found peace, you wouldn't believe
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Re: War
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:27:10 AM AEST
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Quote: "wish the other a coffin"
That's actually an arab expression lol.
Fantastic write, perfectly expressed feelings without revealing too much ;)
Hope everything's okay and keep that ink flowing!
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: War
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:45:15 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very original and well expressed. |
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Re: War
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:21:47 PM AEST
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| I can relate to some of these feelings. The words you used to describe this were really beautiful and they created the poem perfectly. It was very powerful. Great write. |
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Re: War
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by detourchick on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 07:24:33 AM AEST
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| totally no how u feel in this poem loved it |
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