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Life is to short
Contributed by
Faddy
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:05:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We are all in love
with ourselves or another
we've all had parents,
maybe a sister or brother
But to that special someone,
a crush or maybe more.
Did you ever open up,
see what's behind the other door?
Life is to short
and love won't wait
for you to give up
or him to meet fate.
He could be the one
or just one of a kind
of the guys who come strolling
though the pit of your mind.
Copyright ©
Faddy
... [
2004-11-23 22:05:20]
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Re: Life is to short
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by Tamara on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:26:07 PM AEST
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This is great. I loved the last two or three lines. And it's so very true. I hope you have found luck in open all the doors and getting passed the gate keepers.
Caio
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Re: Life is to short
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:14:07 PM AEST
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| This was a touching read. The part about the doors really got to me, because I can relate to it so easily. Keep up this level of work, i love it. |
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