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Am I going crazy?
Contributed by
gimpie
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Silence overwhelming
Screams are barely heard
Everything that's going on
I deem it all absurd,
Shadows dancing slowly
Gliding over every wall
I see the figures clearly
And my mind begins to fall,
A wonderous gift of insight
Or perhaps a curse instead
The eerie glow of moonlight
Soaking through from overhead,
I hear what others miss
And I see what shouldn't be
Dead things that walk in shadow
For all eternity.
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2004-11-23 21:55:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Am I going crazy?
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:12:19 PM AEST (User
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I stopped to read this because it had zero reads and I always shoot zeros down..it has wondeful rhyme and I love the idea and you can be going crazy..so what? join me and we can dance..LOL |
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Re: Am I going crazy?
(User Rating: 1 ) by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:37:37 PM AEST (User
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Wow...I've thought I was going crazy sooo many times before. I can identify with this lol...Wonderfully written! You really have talent |
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