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Gun Shot
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tonight is the night...
Time to end the pain, time to end this misery game...
I'm tired of being called insane, I'm tired of being yelled at with no blame...
I'm not stupid....I'm brilliant can't you see?....
Why must you put me down just to feel good?....
I'm smarter then you'll ever be....but yet I'm stupid and should be shot.
Another hopeless child, beaten to nothing is all you see of me...
Can't you see that your the one who has crushed all my dreams?
All because you want to feel good...
What about me? Am I not deserving enough....
I'm your child don't you love me enough?...
How could you beat me down to this....to this unknown, lifeless human being....
I guess I deserve it, I am nothing, and nothing is I shall be...
So why bother to live? No reason in living if your ashamed of me...
So tonight I'll end my life with the slice of a blade...
Or maybe a gun shot....
Good-Bye daddy...
I'm sorry I wasn't perfect....
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2004-11-23 21:32:41]
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Re: Gun Shot
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by HellsLibrarian on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:53:47 PM AEST
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| Whoa. I sense serious self-worth issues here. However, I don't think it's worth ending a life, and nobody's perfect, babe. Living is a victory; Living well is a triumph. Remember that. |
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Re: Gun Shot
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by purity on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:18:13 PM AEST
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| Being a spoken word artist I choose to paint over the crud my folks splattered against my mental walls.Speak out what u want to see.u are the only 1 who has the power 2 breathe life r death into ur dreams. No one can take awy from you what u don't grant them accss 2 ! hide ur beliefs n ur heart because u believe in u ! Perfection is in the eye of the beholder and I learned that all that matters is what I think of me according to my standards and what I- personally can fix r shine. so keep healing through your art . ur worth it . |
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Re: Gun Shot
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by Darbi on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 12:19:52 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel. To cliche? Well really ive been there.. And i just thought id tell you something i would have loved hearing when i was younger. Get through it...Because you will never feel better than when your acomplished. The day you can look down on them and say "I made it. Im a better person than you could ever think of being, and i did it all on my own" And those seconds make everything okay |
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