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Couldn't You See Me
Contributed by
dreamer_jenny
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:42:38 PM in AEST
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Couldn't you see me
Standing here waiting for you to open your eyes
I've waited for you
For what seems like a thousand cold years
Isn't that enough for you
I fall into your eyes everytime i see them
They captivate me in every single way
My world crumbles and falls around me
And somehow you can't even hear me screaming your name
Darkness takes me in
It keeps me safe from getting hurt again
Couldn't you see me
It's too late now
I guess you will never now what you've could've had
Couldn't you see me screaming my last scream i will ever scream
Just remember it's your loss
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2004-11-23 20:42:38]
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Re: Couldn't You See Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:54:12 PM AEST
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this is a sad but expressive write.. and very true.. sometimes people give up things that are so good for no reason.. when someone leaves you or chooses something over you its never better.. people make such stupid decisions all the time.. you could do better awesome write
Peace and hope
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Re: Couldn't You See Me
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by hilaryduffisme_yah on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:05:27 PM AEST
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| This was a very very good poem ^_^! |
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Re: Couldn't You See Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:07:35 PM AEST
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| This Poem Rocks I can relate to this so very well, This is a really good Poem, Great Write !!!!! I loved it !! Hope eveything works out for you. |
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Re: Couldn't You See Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:38:28 PM AEST
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| I know how this goes, women can be much the same way, and now most of them want me, but I know who they really are, those same girls from HS |
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Re: Couldn't You See Me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:53:41 PM AEST
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Good write....says a lot..
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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