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Cutter
Contributed by
Dri
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:27:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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we bleed
and so it is
mine is the addiction
ruby relief
black of ink, gray of graphite
crimson of blood
I write to distraction
sing to your same
and everything erases that one moment
when blade hits skin
I bleed
but I sleep
I breathe and laugh
I live outside of the knife
it's the surreal glory of the aftermath
it binds me to it's power
water rinses through my hair
fingers work through suds
streaming down wet, slick body
down scars
I am human
they drink
they smoke
they push until they shove
they are human
everyone has to deal
some paint over it with laughter
some breathe sex like air
I, I that am human like them
I drag steel across my pain
cry until resting darkness comes
and wake to tired to stand
Copyright ©
Dri
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2004-11-23 20:27:54]
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Re: Cutter
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by socialburnin on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:26:38 AM AEST
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| a great poem...hits home here...im a former cutter...i luv the use of emothion...sort of reminds me of my own cutter poem...keep writing |
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Re: Cutter
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:19:58 PM AEST
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i am a cutter as well.....and i dont know aobut u but i love to see the scars and to see the blood when it drips down....idk maayb im just psychotic....but this is a great write and the people who say bad things aoubt us just dont get it and they never will....excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Cutter
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:48:35 AM AEST
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another great write
my scars are deep and the intertwine when i cut i do not bleed but lose my mind |
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Re: Cutter
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:52:09 PM AEST
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| powerful write...well expressed and very emotional, I can relate to it very well I too self-inflict...and we are just people too having our own way to cope with our problems...well excellent write keep posting |
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Re: Cutter
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:58:56 PM AEST
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Hmmm . . . I like this, and can relate to it (as before, a little too much maybe) but I don't like it as much as the others of yours I've read so far. It has a good message, and is written well, but it just lacks that particular original, eloquent quality I'd been beginning to associate with your work.
Oh well, still a good poem.
--Nora |
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Re: Cutter
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:28:46 AM AEST
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i thought this was brilliant, held me from the fist word to the last! i can relate and each word is perfectly chosen. i have read it through a few times trying to find a favorite bit but i can't because each favourite line is followed by another favourite line. this has perfectly captured something for me and was a pleasure to read!
keep posting! x |
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