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Erotica(2)
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:11:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Erotica(2)
I walk down the hall,
the one that lead to our first incounter.
I walk alone, all is quiet, all is dark.
I turn around as I hear footsteps, comming from behind.
You put your finger to my mouth as you tell me to be quiet.
You lead me down into an empty hall.
The lights are off, the door is closed.
You pull me close like you did that day,
as you bring me into a kiss.
You take your hand and push my hair back, as more deep it gets.
harder and more passionate becomes that kiss,
as i take my hands and put them below.
I begin to caress what is yours, as you bring me closer.
You unbutton my shirt as I continue,
your body filling with pleasure.
you massage my breasts with your masculine hands.
I can't stand it, I want you so bad,
you tell me to hold off just a few more seconds.
I un-zip your pants, and pull down your boxers,
exposing you completely.
I take my hand and caress it gently.
You un-zip my pants in return,
as anxiety takes over.
You bring me close as I put my legs over your hips.
You push me against the wall, and begin to thrust,
harder and deeper with each take.
pleasure is all I feel this time, loving it more and more.
I moan loudly, but you cover my mouth,
footsteps are heard from above.
I giggle, holding back the moan,
until they finally leave.
I let it out, as you begin to kiss my neck,
gently at first, but the passion takes over.
Your girth still inside, you feel lik eyou're about to explode.
You take it out and release your pleasure.
you smile at me as you zip yourself up.
I close my eyes as we get closer, the continues to rise.
I open my eyes, and to my surprise, you're still there.
"I love you"
Copyright ©
Deathly_Rose
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2004-11-23 20:11:39]
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:20:50 PM AEST
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I liked this very visual almost like I was there truly a steamy write :)
Love
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:42:41 PM AEST
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I'm speechless.....very vivid and enchanting
images ebb and flow on this.
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:32:06 PM AEST
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| Woah... yes very steamy. Just remeber there are kids on the site, and we can't get tooo graphic. But it was pretty hot!!! |
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:59:19 AM AEST
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| Wow.....I love it.....nicely written...should we all be so lucky to feel this way...Shari |
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:59:17 PM AEST
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good grief I was turned on just reading this
very explosive and well written. Very
passionate...
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by butterbuns on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:09:59 PM AEST
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| Not bad for a fifteen year old...but what's with the pulling out at the end? |
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Re: Erotica(2)
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:35:48 PM AEST
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OMG and i thought mine was provocative. This is so hot, very steamy. Great write.
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