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Afterglow
Contributed by
Dri
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:07:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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thriving in the afterglow
living off yesterday's glory
basking in the light
never let it fade
never let it show
they will ask
and what will you say
'I am human just like you'
they will not understand
cannot comprehend the power
lust makes you sweet
but this is so much more
no one else can see what he gave you
no one else would understand
so you are holding on
to the afterglow
never let it fade
never let it show
Copyright ©
Dri
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2004-11-23 19:07:29]
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Re: Afterglow
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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I felt a hidden..almost sinful feast of desire in this.
I loved it :o) Welcome to the family
Roses
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Re: Afterglow
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:47:29 PM AEST
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What a lovely first submission! I like the poem although I don't understand these lines...
and what will you say
'I am human just like you'
that's okay though because its your poem and as long as it makes sense to you then it's beautiful! Great Job looking forward to hearing more from you! |
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Re: Afterglow
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:12:01 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....hope you like it here.
Good write....I enjoyed it.
Jenni |
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Re: Afterglow
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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nicely done welcome to ypdc
Michelle |
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Re: Afterglow
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:50:07 AM AEST
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| this is a sweet write i hope to see more of your works |
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Re: Afterglow
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:55:17 PM AEST
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Loving it. I think this is one I'll want to reread, maybe a few times. I love the second line and how "they will not understand" . . . this whole poem is so beautiful in an almost familiar way; you've taken something we can relate to maybe a little too much and made it poetry.
Familiar, indeed . . .
Thank you for writing this.
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Re: Afterglow
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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Captured that warm, sweet feeling with perfection.
Stitch |
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Re: Afterglow
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:21:16 AM AEST
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| this was lovely, warming x |
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