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Insomniac Me
Contributed by
Faddy
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:29:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I
close my eyes
in the dead
of night
bloodshot
and tired
of laying useless
in fright.
As I try to
sleep
in my mind
he will creep
until he is
finally out
of my head.
But he will
be back,
I think in
my brain,
to haunt
the mere soul
that in me
remains.
The chills down
my back,
the voice
in my head,
the slight thought
that he
will never
be dead.
For in me
he'll live
as I lie
awake
sleepless and
needless and
meless instead.
Insomniac me,
knowing that
he
is gone but will
never leave.
Copyright ©
Faddy
... [
2004-11-23 17:29:45]
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Re: Insomniac Me
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by recompile on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:55:47 PM AEST
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| I love the rhythm. It makes the imagery just come alive. A great read! |
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Re: Insomniac Me
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by pyro_88 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:12:07 PM AEST
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| great read. keep em coming. |
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Re: Insomniac Me
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:11:30 PM AEST
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| i love the way this one feels... almost like you can hear it in your mind... also kind of haunting.... Perfect! |
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